Animatic Feedback

After we completed our animatic, we presented it to the rest of our peers and received constructed criticism about our short film. By gaining this feedback, it helps us now to incorporate new ideas to make our film, Anything But Social, the best it can possibly be. Our peers had to;

• Summarise the narrative
• State the genre
• Reveal the target audience they think is appropriate 
• State improvements that can be made regarding the micro-elements

Most feedback that was given mainly revolved around;

• Including more sound effect (ie, text messages and crying)
• Changing the colour palette when the flashbacks occur, in order to make the contrast clear ad easy to understand
• Change quotation marks when the statistics appear at the end 
• Increasing the time gap between each statistic

Here are some of the notes we received back from our peers-

Here is a video of our group discussing feedback and what we are going to do in regards of moving forward;