Re-filming of First draft

After receiving feedback from our peers in class, and our teacher going through our first draft, we had a few things to change to make our short film the best it can be. This is a list of all the things that needed to be changed when re-filming;

Re-film

Shaky/ Out of focus shots

Costume 1 - BLUE TOP AND LEGGINGS

Close up - reading book in bed

Close up - receiving text

Close up - text message on phone

Medium shot - getting out of bed

Aerial shot - lying down on bed

Costume 2 - RED TOP AND LEGGINGS

Close up- text message

High shot - emily on bed

Close up - emily

Costume 1 - BLUE TOP AND LEGGINGS - RED SCRUNCHIE

Book throw

Medium shot - needs to cry before close up

Close up - crying

Close up - getting stuff out the cupboard

Tracking - walking back into the room

Record her on her bed after she has taken the pills

The re-filming dates were confirmed to be, Wednesday 15th - leave at lunch and film period 5, and this was because this date and time suited everyone that needed to be there.

Here is a video of us as a group discussing what was changed whist filming our first draft;